Reading a book?
Really great work. Obviously this took you quite some time. Constructive criticism is my favorite! So let's see, I could say a lot, but instead I'll say one thing and that is that her right hand looks as if you intended to have her reading a book... and that book actually looks like it's in the picture! Was the undergarment covering the cleavage supposed to be a book originally? Anyhow, great job and keep it up!